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One Without the Other

Have you ever thought of black without white? To see the confusion of day absent of night Sitting on a warm beach without the sea Sunset with no horizon, how difficult it would be? What it would be like to have good times without bad? Being eternally happy but having never felt sad Frustrating, holding an answer to a question never unveiled To have love without you, it will be destined to fail Everything in life must be paired in some way That is why I love you to this very day So to think of me with out you here, it's a lonely idea I must be brave in life, but not until I felt fear If I love you so much, where is the opposed effect? Maybe in another lifetime I will feel the reject

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/20/2010 1:16:00 PM
This write will most defiantely leave the reader pondering Gareth. I wrote a poem about wakening up and there was no oceans or seas, its called " After the Oceans are Gone - Act 1 " - Act to follow >> James
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Date: 3/8/2010 6:28:00 PM
Thankxxx Gareth for your special comments so welcome on my poetry reads.. I also posted a blog today about my son calling from Iraq last night.. appreciate your input ..am sending all comments to my son serving overseas.. thankxxx ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/8/2010 2:00:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this poem,you made me wonder how the warm beach would be without the sea,I never thought that before..I live on an island,most probably that island would be no more..I love the depth of this poem,If one reads between the lines,it goes deeper..excellent ,,Charma
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Date: 3/5/2010 4:37:00 PM
A lovely write Gareth and some lines to ponder and think about... but I don't think u will pay for anything in another lifetime especially once u have experience the beautiful taste of luv ..as u write in your lines.. enjoyed and keep sharing these amazing poems with us all.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/3/2010 1:40:00 PM
Great couplets with rhyme and rhythm. The topic is an excellent one with much descriptiveness and expressiveness of your love for that special one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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