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one wish

i see far far away
wishing upon 
one star
inside beauty
she shines
in a song
sweet words
begin playing

in cold 
blue moon
dancing emotions
blowing in clouds
casting silver shadows
on feelings
tears falling
within a soul

touching heartstrings 
a music box
emotions turning
swelling an ocean
waves to you
droplets it rains
on wings
of a dove
one beautiful soul

shining horizon
warm in the distance
alone dreaming
looking into darkness
awaiting each night
a shooting star
with my wish
come true

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  1. Date: 10/9/2013 6:40:00 AM
    This is really beautiful Liam :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 11:27:00 AM
    - just one wish, Liam ... hope it becomes true .... this is beautiful! - Thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 7:07:00 AM
    this is absolutely shines like the star...nicely penned my friend :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 6:53:00 AM
    This is so very beautiful Liam, you have shown utter brilliance with this write! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!