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One Way Road

Few obstacles, few stops Just the road and me The speed limit I decide Feeling truly free A one way road Headed forward No u-turns allowed And to reverse is unheard Slow down now and then Captured by the scenery Maybe fall a hearts prisoner Perhaps too far deep A few thumps here and there A pothole or two Delayed-- a small problem Move on and pull through Sometimes a split pops up Few ways I can go But can never turn back Still a one way road Places can seem familiar Some may be the same Took a wrong turn someplace In this chancy judgment game A tiring trip at times Just want to take a rest Or drive on with no more care Not giving it my best Itching to move on further Get somewhere a little quicker But can only go so fast As I whine and bicker Whether I like it or not I'm always on the go It's just the road and me On my one way road May 2010

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Date: 10/25/2010 1:07:00 PM
love it,that one way road leads to life or death...i'm fine with either...stay solid on that road
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Date: 5/27/2010 9:11:00 AM
A delight to read, Destiny..sometimes along that one way road, as you get older you'll come to many crossroads...keep faith and stay positive...Enjoyed this introspective write..Thanks for leaving comments on my poem...Peace, love, audrey
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:59:00 PM
I like the feeling of just leaving the past in the past with the crossroads- or decisions we make.
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Date: 5/24/2010 4:16:00 PM
This poem's meter packs a kick and I like the concept of the endless road -- our journey through life. One day it will stop, Destiny, but I hope your travels continue for many decades to come. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2010 5:44:00 PM
Well done Destiny, one can relate to the way yo uended your poem, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/20/2010 2:06:00 PM
Nice. You might say its your desitiny, Destiny. No, I don't stutter. Like the rhyme and meter in this one. Was easy and fun to read. Thanks for sharing. Joe
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Date: 5/20/2010 1:57:00 PM
Very nice Destiny and similar in thought to my Journey poem. Thank you for commenting on it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/20/2010 1:47:00 PM
very nice Destiny B.
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