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One of Those Nights

The morning sun beams through the front windshield like an intruder: brash and unwelcome, forcing you to wake. Whiskey eyed, smelling like an ashtray, parked at the back end of some ghetto ass neighborhood wondering what the hell you did the night before. It's like trying to remember words you haven’t written yet. One thing is for certain: a little bit of rope goes a long way, but a lot of rope will hang you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/27/2014 8:17:00 PM
This the last I read, I liked all seven.
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:53:00 PM
Jay, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:11:00 AM
Jay, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/5/2014 12:00:00 AM
A very deep powerful piece - well done! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 10/4/2014 1:27:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jay - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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