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One Nature Tanka

wafting in prisms silent kaleidoscope dreams birth infinite seeds rise upon the lilting breeze beyond clouds of star dust

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Noah Dugan

Date: 5/9/2017 9:14:00 PM

Psychedelic, refreshing lines. Massive and yet ephemeral.

Noah Dugan

Date: 5/9/2017 9:14:00 PM

Psychedelic, refreshing lines. Massive and yet ephemeral.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2016 9:37:00 PM

I see you won with this.Had to say congratulations!

Michael Dom
Date: 8/6/2016 10:20:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2016 9:07:00 AM

This is very lovely, Michael, and I feel that it merited an even higher placing. Congrats on your win. // paul

Michael Dom
Date: 8/6/2016 10:20:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. I was drawn into the subject poem's imagery and provided my own interpretation rather than an extrapolation of its inspiration, so I guess using the same terms in the stanza was not entirely 'original'.

Tom Arnone

Date: 8/4/2016 7:36:00 PM

I like the image of life your poem evokes -- nice flow to the lines, too. Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2016 5:42:00 PM

this was beautiful, Michael

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/3/2016 1:52:00 PM

Beautiful images. Many thanks for your encouraging comments. Warmly, SuZ