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One More Day.

I had known from the start we could not be apart for if so... The sky would be dim, and life become grim The pain dances freely, that is it's whim. and so... I sit in this place, and consider a fate Is there redemption or is it to late? and then... I see that last light, the spark in the night Is it you or one more last fright? and i see... You were always there, you heard all my cries I just needed to look and to open my eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/28/2016 10:05:00 PM
Patrick Bird, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/11/2015 5:39:00 PM
PATRICK, this is a good read, thanks for sharing..... **SKAT**
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Date: 11/11/2009 4:27:00 PM
Like your style ! great poem, love Simone
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