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One Deep Breath

One deep breath, to live like you are dying

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2011 7:51:00 AM

Today is nothing but one deep breath! Good morning H. Hill, stopping by to say happy Easter... and hope you are enjoying life.. I see you have not been much on the soup.... well take care and enjoy your day... always ..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2010 11:40:00 AM

Heather, it is amazing how that is all it takes..enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/5/2010 7:01:00 AM

Fantastic Monoku...talented poet! Enjoyed reading this Sat. a.m. And thanks for comments on one of mine....Much love, Audrey

Date: 6/1/2010 1:14:00 PM

Good message. I think we often take life for granted and forget to really live each day. So much said in just one line. Keep on writing!!!! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/11/2010 1:13:00 PM

still waiting for a reply to my e-mail...thnx for the friend confirmation....Jimmy

Travis Tapley

Date: 4/29/2010 1:15:00 PM

The thought I got from reading this is that big deep breath you take right before you do something big, that breath to get the jitters out. This was very good and placed a lot of thoughts inside this old head!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/25/2010 4:26:00 AM

Hi Heather! Thank you for your comments..Very well written Monoku! Wished to read more of yours on PS...Have a nice sunday...Gert