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Take Me To Church

gathered on the lawn at Sabbath - a chattering of starlings For the Wonderful One Liners Poetry Contest of s. grace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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James Inman
Date: 12/9/2017 1:39:00 AM
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What a beautifully painted picture, much more appropriate than what I remember hearing from the male congregation at the the little church I attended when I was young. (Biddies and jabber are words that come to mind, lol.)
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David De La Croes
Date: 7/21/2016 3:17:00 AM
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This is so good - starlings are everywhere here at work and home, and I can see the picture in my mind which you have painted. Congratulations, Andrea! David
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/19/2016 3:18:00 PM
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I still think this is one of your best one liners, Andrea! I would have placed it much higher. Congratulations. // paul
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/19/2016 2:15:00 AM
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Your very clever one liner is awesome Andrea! With these contests, it is a matter of personal taste, and in my personal taste this is a top winner my friend! Congrats! 7 ; )
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/18/2016 10:59:00 AM
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Nice line Andrea and congrats on your placement. :)
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Karam Misra
Date: 7/18/2016 10:46:00 AM
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Nice imagery, Andrea. Reminds me of a group of women in a park in my area. Starlings/chattering - nice allusion. Congrats on your win! ~karam~
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Jesse Day
Date: 7/18/2016 12:28:00 AM
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Congrats on your win in the One-Liner Contest! Jesse
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Tom Arnone
Date: 7/17/2016 7:43:00 PM
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Andrea, does your one-liner hold any significance? Congrats! :-)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/17/2016 8:49:00 PM
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I just like the way a group of starlings is called a chattering and it reminds me of lots of women talking at their church!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/17/2016 6:23:00 PM
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dropping back with my congrats this should have placed much higher in my eyes:-) hugs jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/17/2016 5:57:00 PM
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Andrea, just beautiful lady...congrats on your placement in the one liner contest :)-luloo
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Skat A
Date: 7/17/2016 5:17:00 PM
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andrea, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/24/2015 1:44:00 PM
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Nice studding the form :) PD
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Kash Poet
Date: 2/10/2015 9:31:00 PM
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Just beautiful!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/29/2014 4:35:00 PM
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Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Rob Carmack
Date: 12/28/2014 11:58:00 AM
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Congrats Andrea.
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Joseph May
Date: 12/28/2014 9:32:00 AM
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Congrats on your first place win Andrea
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Date: 12/28/2014 8:50:00 AM
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hi ANDREA, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~
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John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2014 8:24:00 AM
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...probably gossiping about the hat the cardinal wore. Congratulations on your "top of the tree" placement.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/28/2014 7:51:00 AM
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Always a number one in my eyes, congratulations Andy xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2014 6:59:00 PM
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Congratulations on your 1st Place win, Andrea! Sandra
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 12/27/2014 6:40:00 PM
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Congratulations on your first place win.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/27/2014 5:42:00 PM
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dropping back with my congrats on your top win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 12/27/2014 3:31:00 PM
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congratulations on this win Andrea
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/15/2014 2:12:00 AM
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They are noisy little creatures aren't they? Daring too! Nice Monoku...
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Jack Horne
Date: 12/13/2014 4:28:00 PM
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love this!
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