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One and Only Crush

Do you know every night I dream of you Visions of your lips upon mine Have you any idea how much I think of you So much it has become a pastime Are you aware of how often I drown Inside your perfect green eyes My mind is so crowded with reflections of you For other thoughts I have not the time Haven't you noticed how we belong together Just the notion is too sublime! Endlessly I want to feel your touch And to be always on your mind If we were never to be together That would be a terrible crime Don't you know that you mean everything to me I want to give you my heart for all time You are the only one in this world I want To be forever and always mine Give me a chance at romance And I promise you'll never ask why

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/2/2013 5:27:00 AM
This was well penned April. You've done a great job with this one.
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Date: 8/5/2013 3:58:00 PM
This is love written so beautifully dear
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Date: 7/31/2013 8:48:00 AM
careful what you wish for... nicely done
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Date: 7/28/2013 4:14:00 PM
I'm not normally a romance girl, but this one really spoke to me! It's heading to favorites! Amazing poem! -Heather
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Date: 7/23/2013 6:23:00 PM
Wow, I can truly feflect your last comment and say that I can relate to this poem, great work.
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Date: 7/22/2013 7:00:00 PM
Words say it all! Lovely feelings described out there! Really good (=
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Date: 7/22/2013 12:12:00 AM
hmmm.... passion and wholeheartedly. These characteristics exude every line in this poem. A good poem
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Date: 7/21/2013 9:34:00 PM
This a very deeply felt this person should be lucky to have someone that feels like these lines speak for. and also thank you for your comments. cheri
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Date: 7/21/2013 3:41:00 PM
Truly heartfelt and emotional! Well-written! Milt
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Date: 7/21/2013 11:13:00 AM
A real crush does feel like the one and only. The reality of life can be cruel. I always say, when you have to tell someone that they are not the one, be gentle. An explanation that the "chemistry is just not right" seems to me to be the kindest way to say it. Some people can be cruel, and I hope you are not hurt if it doesn't work out. It might feel really bad (the voice of experience).
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Date: 7/21/2013 4:25:00 AM
Hello! April Gabriella - Not many people know the difference between a crush Vs Lust, Till this Poem came along! Imagery is wonderful - The Green eyes will give you away and our secret is out - No only jokin' folks - splendid write here! Perry C.
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Date: 7/20/2013 6:43:00 PM
Very romantic and passionate rhyme April...Keep writing and growing as a poet...Have a wonderful and blessed evening - Tim
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Date: 7/19/2013 3:12:00 PM
"Crush", that term seemingly was becoming extinct. Yet, it seems to have been given a 2nd life. I see this term being used more & more....by grown adults, no less. Here's hoping they're listening! =) Nicely written here!
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