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Thy try if not I rise Thou if I fall Death works on respect their or is it there my truth is honest , but; How honest of it is my price Ya! the grasshopper speaks neither less a blind speaks God are to give a hand Never a leg but as I see Rain identify as I mention a angel cries Now we give Faith to come to a Y Arouse caterpillar its time . I epiphany Why never shall it to become the illustration of failure; For Failure I must explain is only a try I will be on your side for truth is blood as simple ; for the is but Now at my mirror,'' keep on the game of life '' for when you read this I should have surely died P.S. I'll never stop asking Y

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Date: 5/21/2016 12:53:00 AM
Louis Velazquez, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/19/2016 2:07:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Louis. :)
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Date: 5/18/2016 10:35:00 PM
Hi Louis,"Is that the letter y? Just wondering no worries, it's used commonly by a range of new poets. I kind of like it. One is the perfect SOlo number to ever be... :) Linda
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Date: 5/18/2016 10:35:00 PM
PS... Louis,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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