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Once Upon a Whole New World

Obstructing the Time's line-of-sight recoiling abruptly, neither a fallen hand-held folder nor a glance stolen away, counterfeiting emotional disturbance but sounds to mastery, executive officers waiting for the day-to-day updated reports. Unloading Time's viscous cycle of exhaust onto the couch, painless worthy of note-taking task reminder, a lost love, overcoming the abdominal centre of gravity umbrella to grasp, night's vivid persons voice of Wisdom to amplify and filter. An overwhelming notion of the folder, the glance, and the love. Warm alight from a magic carpet onto the late-hour coffee shop, hail to the standing floral dress under the glowing streetlights, our eyes have met in a once upon a whole new world, love spreading out our hearts to become a giant shimmering star, entrusting her my hugs and kisses, my love, and my world. New passion overcoming my insides calling for a cupid's bless, enough of this game and deftly join me in a dainty dance, with you my senses return and with you I feel joyously right. When I saw you over the cotton clouds singing merrily, out of nowhere getting the courage to crawl kissing you, rolling your eyes under the skies taken by surprise, loving me over the sea so let us dance when I count to three, dazzling on a magic carpet of this mystical whole new world. Saturday, 6th of February 2010

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Date: 10/9/2014 6:37:00 AM
Lovely romantic write, congrats on the win, HSK
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Hsk Alkendi
Date: 10/9/2014 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Dr Ram Mehta for the kind word
Date: 10/8/2014 7:23:00 PM
A happy poem. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/9/2014 7:09:00 AM
Thank you Joyce
Date: 10/8/2014 3:56:00 PM
Big congrats to you for your win!!
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Hsk Alkendi
Date: 10/8/2014 5:30:00 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea, very kind of you to come back and congratulate me, i really appreciate it =^.^=
Date: 10/8/2014 1:29:00 PM
I was also thinking what Andrea said so when I read your answer the awe factor hit. Your poem became very beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/8/2014 1:48:00 PM
hehe, I appreciate your comment, thanks a lot Brenda :)
Date: 10/8/2014 11:09:00 AM
I like the build up to the romance at the end of the poem many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/8/2014 1:47:00 PM
Thanks heaps Jan ^^,
Date: 10/5/2014 7:35:00 PM
now i must say this is very beautifully painted golden piece
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Hsk Alkendi
Date: 10/6/2014 8:41:00 AM
thanks heaps Liam for your kind words, much appreciated
Date: 10/5/2014 12:33:00 AM
The first half of this seemed a bit dull and then it livened right up when you began telling of the magic carpet . That is exactly what this poem needed and you ended on a magical note!
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Date: 10/5/2014 2:17:00 AM
Exactly, I wanted to illustrate how the life's been: dull and boring and you do not want to listen to it, until her magic entered producing a whole new world! Thanks heaps for your comment, much appreciated :D

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