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Once My Guardian Devil

I miss how his face saved me from disgrace. How he kept me alive when a part of me had died. I miss how his smile made my tears run dry. How we laugh at his jokes when a part of me had broke. I miss how his voice let my heart rejoice. How he sang me a song when everything went wrong. I miss how his hands reached out to help me stand. How he held me tight when I am about to lose a fight. I miss how his words conquered my world. How happy we were when we're together. I miss how he remembered me when it's 21, How you cared for me like no one else does. I miss how he made me his angel and caught me when I fall. How he became my guardian devil, thus, in his arms, I'm in heaven. I miss everything about you, and everything we've been through. How it shatters my heart, why are we apart? Wondering how it suddenly came into an end, When yesterdays, we were best of friends. Behind this tears, behind this pain, How could you forgot me and left me under the rain?

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/26/2015 12:15:00 PM

This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..

Leng Mundoc
Date: 3/26/2015 12:24:00 PM

And I am so flattered for your kind words. Thanks for appreciating and for the compliments, too. Great day sir.:)

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2015 10:50:00 PM

Leng, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Leng Mundoc
Date: 3/20/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thanking you so much. I feel so at home having a warm welcome from beautiful people like you. I wish to be inspired by these poets and in time, be an inspiration too. I was not so confident of what I wrote as I always got a not so good feedback on my work. I really love poems, but I feel like poetry doesn't love me be. And it feels so good to hear good compliments on my work. And that makes me love poetry soup and that I also love to have a friends here. Hope you'll be one.:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2015 10:31:00 PM

Leng, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Leng Mundoc
Date: 3/20/2015 11:43:00 AM

It's really overwhelming to be welcomed warmly in this community by beautiful people. Thank you so much for making me feel at home. And that I love the feeling that my work has finally being appreciated. Thank you.:)

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/18/2015 10:01:00 PM

Very good piece, Leng. Your emotion jumps right from the page and grips the reader. Welcome to PS. May you find a haven here and together with all the wonderful and kindhearted poets, let us enjoy each other's creative growth. Mabuhay! Hugs! :) Kim

Leng Mundoc
Date: 3/20/2015 11:48:00 AM

Oh. It's really flattering and a very good feeling to receive a good compliments from you. Honestly, I wasn't really confident on my work. But thank you. It makes me feel I wrote something with sense. And that i 'm loving poetry soup. I wanted to be inspired by great, friendly poets like you, and enhance my verses. And in time, be an inspiration too. Thank you very much. So glad to hear from you.:)