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Once Love Has Died

Once love has died it cannot be revived Sweet sentiments are sadly laid to rest From memories no pleasure is derived The broken heart is vanquished in its quest Unnurtured love will quickly fade away Much like a wilted rose unquenched of thirst Or flower of the sun cloistered of ray Affections die when they have not been nursed I tried to warn you that my heart was sore My tears a testament of grievous plight You did not hear my plea for something more And now my love is veiled away from sight To resurrect my love is no mean task For miracle of life my heart does ask Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/27/2013 5:12:00 PM
Beautiful and well drafted but very sad.The second verse so true. well done. my best wishes. Pete.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 5:29:00 PM
How can we appreciate joy if we cannot compare it to sadness. Yes, it is a sad write but a hopeful one. Thanks for your visit. I appreciate it. :)
Date: 12/27/2013 9:01:00 AM
Miracles happen every day. This is a beautiful sad piece Eileen. How was your Christmas? Is your dad still with you or did he head home already?
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2013 9:35:00 PM
Yep all is well, having45 people for dinner tomorrow night.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 5:29:00 PM
Yes, they surely do. My Christmas is amazing thus far. My Papa is staying at my place now....I'm thrilled. He is so sweet. I just adore him. Thanks for asking.......hope all is well with you too.
Date: 12/27/2013 8:59:00 AM
Love is a flower. Water its roots, or you'll stick with plastic roses the rest of your life. Fantastic.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 5:23:00 PM
Yes, so right. It is easy to wilt and fade..........Plastic roses..........beautiful.........but without scent. Lovely comment, Drake. Thanks for the visit. I've missed you.
Date: 12/27/2013 5:24:00 AM
You never cease to amaze. (7)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 8:46:00 AM
Justice....hey partner....Hope all is well and that you are happy. Always a pleasure, my dear.
Date: 12/27/2013 12:36:00 AM
Wow, Eileen, the ending is deep. It strikes me in every way. ( This poem made me realize, how much I miss reading your poetry.) Sorry, I haven't been reading much new poems these days. My vacation started one week before Thanksgiving. I even close my restaurant, that way I can enjoy my vacation. However, I do miss being at home, commenting from my computer in hard these days---heheh.. I'm doing most of my commenting from my phone and laptop at times. I am looking forward to reading more this coming year.. So you better watch out with me, when I go on a commenting spree. Like that other night.. LOL... I'm just happy, to be here that is all.. Enjoy your new year.. LUV~ LINDA
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 8:50:00 AM
I've missed your visits and posts. Glad all is well. Thanks for the love.....Good to get away sometimes, isn't it??? I have my dad and daughter visiting...There is joy and peace in my heart!!!! Sending warm hugs and kisses....Hope this new year will be filled with blessings for you.

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