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Once when the stars shined in the evening skies
Once, when the fire raged in your seductive eyes
Life was never given into compromise
You touched my hand

Once, when our hearts were filled with wonder
Once, when the world could not pull us under
Flashes of lightning and all the thunder
Were at our command

Once, when we sailed the open sea
Once, when our hearts and minds were free
Leaving all that love could ever be
Buried in the sand

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Once...upon ... a lovely time

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 9:40:00 PM
    Wonderful poem where once love thrived but now is buried. I want to wish you a very Happy Birthday. Have a fantastic day. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 7:17:00 AM
    Beautiful and soothing beyond words. It was a joy to read these lines my friend. Thanks for your wonderful comments on my featured Poem. Sorry I am still not in a position to read and write on PS for some more time. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Vince S Jr.

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 1:51:00 PM
    beautiful write, my friend

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 1:50:00 PM
    such a warm voice soothing me no end, vince... clap, clap!.. thanks for coming by; i haven;t seen my featured poem for the week.. this computer or TPS hangs!... :) huggs to you!

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:25:00 PM
    Beautiful poetic verse Vince, enjoyed it, V

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 10:25:00 AM
    sounds like you should be digging,lol,great write Vince

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 9:01:00 PM
    I love this one of yours, Vince. it's everything a poem should be!

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 5:33:00 PM
    a beautiful poem, Vince, but such a sad ending. hugs, catie :)