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On This Day

Unmoving, sweltering, its evening falls,
Unrolling slowly a knotty unbleached cotton pall,
Turns unceremoniously and exits - 
      the day ending eight years,
Eliott's[1] sends a breeze, a silent scene ends call.

[1] Eliott’'s beach

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  1. Date: 7/17/2013 3:50:00 PM
    Irfana,,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"

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    Date: 7/19/2013 1:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Skat, Thank you for your warm welcome, reading my poem and encouragement. Poetry Soup is a nice place! I definitely wish to speak to more like minded poets. Thanks PFI
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 9:52:00 AM
    - Hi,you - A well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 7/17/2013 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne-Lise, as anyone can say looking at my poems I am not trained in writing. I aspire to express myself better and poems are a natural medium for me. Natural and coarse :) Thanks for the encouragement!