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On the Edge of a Dream

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On the Edge of a Dream

scent of virgin snow
bathing the night in silence
     my daughter’s footsteps
          echoing on dream’s frayed edge
a yearning heart constricting

I dedicate this to my daughter who is working and living in the UK. Snow scenes always remind me of her and I long to see and hold her again.

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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:53:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on your top winning spot Suzette love xx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 11:14:00 PM
    very nice win ;}

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:13:00 PM
    Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:18:00 AM
    congrats on your 1st place win; the first time I read this I had it pegged as a top placement, and kudos to you for managing to write a personal poem on the theme :)

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 7:30:00 PM
    This is a gorgeously written tanka! "Dream's frayed edge" - I love that imagery. I am also honored to share 1st place with you :)

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:57:00 PM
    love this tanka, Su. No snow here! Happy New Year to you. Thanks very much - loved your contest. Congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 12:43:00 PM
    Excellent tanka here Su!Happy New Year to you.

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 11:56:00 PM
    Our son is home from University, when he is home it makes us realize how much we miss him when he is away. It must be even harder when your Daughter is on a different continent. Great poem that all us parents can appreciate.

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 8:18:00 PM
    How absolutely lovely and,Deb

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 4:44:00 PM
    a beutiful write wishes

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 1:09:00 PM
    What a well-written dedication!

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 12:49:00 PM
    Beautiful !!