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On the Beach-Together

in passion's embrace each the other to know- washed by love's flow lying side by side in the incoming tide- touched by nature's surge

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 9:42:00 PM

BRIAN..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2012 10:00:00 PM

I loved this one. Always a sucker for love on a beach! Congrats on your win in my contest with Nikko. WEll deserved!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/9/2012 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Movie Senryu" contest Brian. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/7/2012 2:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win in the coontest, Brian. Love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2012 1:42:00 PM

Haven't seen the movie but your review makes it sound one worth watching..Enjoyed reading your review..Congrats on your win..Welcome back into the winners' circle..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/7/2012 12:14:00 PM

This was a very romantic read for me... really enjoyed this one, Brian! I really liked how you depicted the scene here... congrats on your win :D

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/7/2012 3:36:00 AM

HI Brian. A new movie to me..the 2nd senryu is my fav one. Great lines describing a powerful scene. Congrats on this win. Gwendolen

Broken Butterfly

Date: 12/29/2011 3:45:00 PM

I never saw this movie but I heard my mother talking about it many times. I think your senryu captured the romance. Thank you very much for my 1st place in your 8/9/10 contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/28/2011 2:53:00 AM

Good Brian,I like it.........and dreaming ....me and ..... on the beach together. OXOX hugs Anne-Lise