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On the Beach

Moon glow on the beach waves kissing lagoons soft shore gentle winds flowing Mother appears there her shell hides life to bury joy from distant love Christopher Bunton For tropical moonlight contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 7:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Tropical Theme" contest Christopher. Love, Carol

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/19/2012 7:06:00 AM

Thank you!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/17/2012 8:28:00 AM

Congrats Christopher on your win.Enjoyed the read.

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/17/2012 9:02:00 AM

Thank you!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 8:03:00 PM

congrats Christopher on a fab win for this tropical treasure luv..

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/17/2012 9:02:00 AM

Thank you!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/16/2012 12:41:00 PM

Happy to see you on the winner's list, Christopher. Lovely haiku. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/16/2012 3:20:00 PM

Thank You!

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/14/2012 11:29:00 AM

Glad this was a winner, enjoyed. harry

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/14/2012 7:17:00 PM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2012 12:20:00 AM

a very interesting one this is and lovely images, particularly in the first haiku. I see it got a win. BIG congrats to you.

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/14/2012 6:03:00 AM

Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2012 4:36:00 PM

Happy for your win Christopher ! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/13/2012 5:20:00 PM

Thank you!!

Joel Hunt

Date: 3/13/2012 4:09:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem ,good write and flow. Good imagery.

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/13/2012 5:19:00 PM

Thank you!!

Date: 3/13/2012 4:09:00 PM

No rhyme, no metaphors, no meaning, no point. Not even a poem.

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/13/2012 5:19:00 PM

I think that most of what I write sucks too. Thanks for stopping by.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/13/2012 4:07:00 PM

lovely piece. Congrats on your wins : )

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/13/2012 5:14:00 PM

Thank you!!