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On My Own

Where were you when I was down and needed you to lend me a hand? Where were you when I was weak and needed to lean onto you? Where were you when I was lonely and needed you to be by my side? Where were you when I was beset with doubts and fears and needed you to comfort me? Now I have come to depend on myself and need you no more, Now I feel secure down here and do not need to be picked up, Darkness had held me in its comforting arms for many silent nights Now I do not need the blinding rays of light Nor do I need the guiding trail to show me the way, In the wild ways of wilderness I have now come to feel at home. In the midst of gathering fog and the darkening clouds I am the one who set sail, Now I see clearly in the darkness and savor the melody of the storm, I sail calmly into the wild seas and fault no one if I hit the rocky shores, I will yield readily to the death’s overtures!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/22/2015 3:11:00 PM
intensely portrayed from the gut, abdul.. well done!.. huggs
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/22/2015 5:38:00 PM
Well, that's how I feel I guess. Thanks
Date: 7/21/2015 7:47:00 PM
So nice to read your poetry this evening [each of us is a world unto ourselfs ;)] . Light & Love
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Abdul Malik
Date: 7/22/2015 10:08:00 AM
Perfectly so! Thanks.
Date: 7/21/2015 6:00:00 PM
Deep sad imagery to start but the ending is inspiring Abdul:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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