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On My Mind

And there it was, somewhere along wreath of winds I was brought to the lightest of ease. Here, under the pour of this waterfall, I wish to lay on glossy tracks Tending fingers among the pebbles, I marvel.This landscape of my mind. Of this I wish to bring to you, Or you to it. Whomever it is that you might be. A place, however far away- The liquid trail lies clear, soothingly Ahead of me. Limits Contest, Chase Trevi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/7/2015 6:34:00 AM
Such languid thoughts...beautiful, serene. Keep posting, Lyva! hugs
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Date: 8/6/2015 3:19:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Lyva - Good luck in contest !- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/6/2015 2:07:00 AM
your style is distinct; i enjoy the fragmented but flowing expression of this piece, lyva... thanks for your feedback!
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