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On My Birthday

Transfixed upon a lucite sunray the iron blood of longshoremen washed beneath the whisperings of the bay a pupil canvas pierced through by the scalpel of elephantine deceit vision yellowed in the flowering of a lost identity the young man swallows deeply and mourns the gist of his first twenty-nine years.

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