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A Fairy Tale or Not Short Story Poem

 

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On My Birthday! My Birthday dawned. I got morning calls. All wished best He did not call. Party is arranged. All well -wishers came. I waited in vain. He did not turn up. . Posies greeted me. Gifts also obliged Downy noon faded. Drooping eve shadowed. He didn’t turn up. Forlorn night darkened. He didn’t show up. I retired in bed. Sweet dream imagined He must be coming. Dream also betrayed. .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/22/2024 10:02:00 PM
"Dream also betrayed" - Indeed, a poignant tale. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/12/2016 2:13:00 PM
I see that congrats are due a second time with this sweet write! Congrats, Anisha! Blessings!
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Date: 8/6/2016 12:51:00 AM
Anisha :) Congrats on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Little Me - Guess Who" and celebrate your win. Forever and Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 11/25/2015 8:50:00 AM
Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/25/2015 9:34:00 PM
Thanks Sara
Date: 11/20/2015 10:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Anisha! Love, Kim
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/25/2015 9:35:00 PM
Thanks Kim Love. Anisha
Date: 11/19/2015 6:24:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Anisha :-) hugs jan xx
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/19/2015 7:39:00 PM
thanks jan
Date: 11/19/2015 9:26:00 AM
Nice write Anisha.
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Date: 11/19/2015 7:41:00 PM
Thanks James for appreciation. Anisha D
Date: 11/19/2015 7:10:00 AM
Well written, Anisha! Balveen
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/19/2015 7:43:00 PM
Thanks Balveen Anisha
Date: 11/18/2015 7:32:00 PM
Congratulations Anisha
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/19/2015 7:43:00 PM
Thanks Nayada Anisha D
Date: 11/18/2015 6:49:00 PM
I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win Anisha!! -LU xxx *smiles*
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/19/2015 7:45:00 PM
Thanks Laura Anisha D
Date: 11/8/2015 8:07:00 AM
Simple,sweet and lyrical off course
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/19/2015 7:47:00 PM
Thanks Rizwana Anisha D
Date: 11/4/2015 1:42:00 PM
Very lovely Anisha....good luck in the contest and Happy Birthday
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/5/2015 7:21:00 AM
Feeling very happy as you wished me Happy Birthday. My Birth day is on 23rd April. Thank you Tim Anisha D

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