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On Love Ghosts

So hard to hold love now in the moment between a caress and a look too strong too hesitant too weak too steady To watch it glide down and away from my body, it's sighs gone quiet To know it didn't find peace with me. © Gry W Christensen

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Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/25/2014 11:04:00 PM

A beautiful job done Gry, you have let the poem like water and how smoothly it ends.. Friend Malik

Gry Christensen
Date: 9/26/2014 2:53:00 PM

Hello Malik, thanks so much for reading and leaving such a nice feedback. Love sometimes is like a ghost...........

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/21/2014 10:29:00 AM

very beautifully painted piece

Gry Christensen
Date: 9/25/2014 7:29:00 PM

Hello Liam, I am glad you like it! Thank you for your very kind words, I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2014 10:21:00 PM

a veryfresh take on this age old topic of love. I enjoyed how you made the whole verse just slide down the way the lines did! Like food going down our throats. .OH, I am back to one of our favorite topics again. Too bad we can't have a food fest. Food doesn't disappoint like love can!

Gry Christensen
Date: 9/25/2014 7:28:00 PM

Hi, Hahaha, food.....:) A never tiresome topic. Thank you very much for reading my poem and taking the timd to give me such nice feedback.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/20/2014 4:15:00 PM

Love has a way to slowly slip away but haunt forever....Lovely piece though with a touch of melancholy. Thanks for your visit today.

Gry Christensen
Date: 9/25/2014 7:22:00 PM

Hi Eileen, Very true, these ghost keeps haunting our hearts and minds sometimes. Many thanks for your kind comment!

Little Known Nothing

Date: 9/20/2014 2:45:00 PM

I really liked this, so Simply put but beautifully said. Lovely. L.k.n

Gry Christensen
Date: 9/25/2014 7:20:00 PM

Thank you so much! I glad to hear you liked it. Thanks for both reading and commenting. :)