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''On Broken Wings''

sad my soul weeping heart I have been hurt oh how deep the dagger plunges and twists I am staggered by the hate and the love within I bleed oh sadness this girl weeps tears falling and I write I pen the pain sad verses fly away on broken wings . . . ____________________________ May 25, 2015 Poetry/Triple Tetractys/''on broken wings'' Copyright Protected, ID 05-676-836-25 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/2/2016 5:23:00 PM

So heartfelt and so well written a 7 Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2016 9:47:00 PM

You do sadness so beautifully, Constance. I typed in your name and this poem came up!! How are you tonight? I'm off to make fajitas now. have a wonderful weekend.

Abdiel Rios

Date: 6/11/2015 11:39:00 AM

Wow... um that's sad , and good I guess this poem talks about your wings right? But its good I give it a 6

Constance La France
Date: 2/20/2016 1:29:00 PM

abdiel, thanks for visiting, my soul is hurt ....

John Lawless

Date: 6/4/2015 7:21:00 AM

Jan, the catharsis of poetic release is summed up beautifully in the last line of this poem..."sad verses fly away on broken wings". It is even more poignant in meaning as it reflects your poetic pseudonym.

Constance La France
Date: 2/20/2016 1:30:00 PM

John, thanks so much for your wonderful comment , appreciate ...

Constance La France
Date: 6/4/2015 8:05:00 AM

I know you mean broken wings