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on a frozen lake

geese sit on the edge of a frozen lake

   bills tucked 'neath ruffled feathers

      snowflakes fall from grey skies

~~~ 07/02/2013~~~

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:42:00 PM
    The picture of cold. Lovely words you have used here.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:47:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery in this Kimo.Congrats Francine on your win!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 3:52:00 AM
    Beautiful write. Congratulations on the win Francine!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:45:00 AM
    congratulations on this great write....

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 9:54:00 AM
    Excellent !! I see the geese, the sky...I feel the cold. Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:45:00 AM
    Very descriptive of a winter scene..Congrats on your winning work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:31:00 PM
    Francine.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:09:00 PM
    I just knew this one would be high. GREAT poem and BIG congrats, Francine.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:40:00 PM
    You have painted a lovely winter scene, Francine! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Francine congrats on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 12:00:00 PM
    We've got plenty of geese here in New Jersey. Your nice write appears as if you are describing some of our local scenery.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 11:15:00 AM
    what a great picture you created for the frozen landscape kimo contest. ME LIKES.

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 5:40:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 9:02:00 PM
    picture perfect.... well done Francine..

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:36:00 PM
    Hi Francine, i enjoyed the vivid image the geese snuggling within their own wings. A very chilly and beautiful picture that makes nature stand still...always~ LINDA