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On a Crisp Autumn Evening

The susurrus breeze of spring’s ingénue trees now rasps and wheezes, rustling sparse leaves as the trees, now crones, rest brittle bones, primed for winter’s coming.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/27/2014 1:11:00 PM
such wonderful imagery - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2014 10:06:00 AM
GARY, it's an honor having your poem on my winning list. Congratulations on your win in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE LINDA
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Gary Watkins
Date: 12/27/2014 11:38:00 AM
Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed it. It's so nice to have you back, Linda. You were missed.
Date: 9/15/2014 10:28:00 PM
Wow, ME LIKEY!!! This is some awesome imagery and the sounds you employed made it even more wintry sounding. GREAT job.
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Gary Watkins
Date: 9/15/2014 10:56:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. It means even more coming from you.

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