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Olden Ocean

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Olden Ocean

White curl'd hairs of spumes
reveals its longevity-
Blue Ocean of Old

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  1. Date: 9/19/2009 11:37:00 AM
    Lovely piece which fills the senses with the picture you paint. Well done, Ismael, and thanks for your comments!

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 12:11:00 PM
    Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. The title compliments the poem. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind comments. Have a good weekend! Karen

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 3:12:00 AM
    Love the Haiku. It is so descriptive that I can see the place. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 12:44:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery, going to my fav's