Old Horn

old horn new age begins hands turn the cycle back as men to old tribes is inclined the bright new iron, the axe, the helmet those swords of yesterday arise weary world turns again to a past world’s old horn 03/09/13 By Tahera Mannan For Nette’s Just Nine Lines contest, visual 2

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 1:57:00 PM

Hello Tahera, miss reading your poems. enjoyed the shape. LINDA

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/2/2016 2:42:00 AM

tahera, you are back!... hope to read you again, hin!..huggs

Skat A

Date: 12/26/2015 6:36:00 PM

TAHERA, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2015 9:28:00 PM

still miss you, tahera. Hope you are ok.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2015 9:47:00 PM

Tahera, just came here to say happy birthday again. I miss you. It's been a long time and I hope you will post some new poems. What do you think?

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/23/2015 7:47:00 PM

I agree with all below so great to see your name here again. Light & Love

... Gigno

Date: 5/30/2015 1:55:00 PM

!!!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/7/2014 10:30:00 PM

How are you Tahera. We haven't heard anything from you since a long. Hope you are keeping well? Hope to hear soon from you. Ravindra K Kapoor

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2014 9:55:00 PM

just came here to see what had become of you. I do hope you return to us, Tahera.

Farhana Akter

Date: 5/20/2014 11:52:00 PM

Hmm

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/4/2014 4:37:00 PM

Just thought I'd stop by and read your latest again. I see you haven't been posting recently...Sure do miss you! - Tim

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/29/2013 12:11:00 AM

A great poem with subliminal touches! Pls review my latest too.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/27/2013 2:09:00 PM

and around and around we go aye? I have missed our chats! I hope all is well. Light & Love

Jack Horne

Date: 9/22/2013 3:55:00 PM

so glad this was a winner

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/15/2013 8:03:00 PM

I like your creative and original theme. Very well crafted. Congrats on your win :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/13/2013 10:11:00 AM

a nice winning poem Tahera... always love LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/12/2013 8:09:00 AM

congratulations~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2013 12:28:00 AM

big congrats to you , dearie. I don't know how you placed but I bet Nette really loved this one.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/11/2013 8:49:00 PM

Congrats on a wonderful win, Tahera! Love, Kim

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/11/2013 8:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2013 6:08:00 AM

you flow with dramatic lines, tahera... big cheers to you for a fascinating win!..:) huggs... check my blog if you have time..

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/10/2013 8:20:00 PM

good write, like the path you took with this one...congrats on your win :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/10/2013 4:39:00 PM

Congratulations Tahera, a powerful piece.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/5/2013 6:07:00 PM

Wow Tahera, well done!...This looks like a VERY difficult form and theme for the contest but you have pulled it off for sure!...Reads like a winner - Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2013 6:02:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Great work..Reads like winners' list to me..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara