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Old Blue

I’ve been lost for days now, an’ all the country looks the same. I’ve been walkin’ ‘round in circles, an’ found my footsteps once again. Me ‘tucker’ bags been empty for, three days an’ there’s this ragin’ thirst. I feel my tethers at its end. I can only fear the worst. I must keep these tired legs strugglin’ on toward the mirage up ahead. I pass the bones of sheep an’ roo’s, an’ quietly shudder at the dead. There’s not a livin’ thing around, ‘cept ‘Old Blue’ at me feet, he’s lookin’ more like mutton now, an’ good enough to eat. I stumbled to a creek bed, where red gums offered shade, with one of my last three matches, a little fire was made. ‘Old Blue’ looked bravely up at me, he knew there’s nought to eat. And I’m sure my old dog realised, he was the only meat … ‘Old Blue’ laid beside the campfire, but was lookin’ pretty scant, for he never had his coat on now. He couldn’t bark or pant. I thanked him in a sobbin’ grace … cut slices off him with a knife. A real mate was me old dog ‘Blue’. I know he saved me life. ‘Old Blue’ deserves a medal, for the dedication he has shown. He’d know that I was upset now, ‘cause I hate eatin’ on me own. Old memories came floodin’ back, now I’m full I feel so sad, as I recall the good times, ‘Old Blue’ and I have had. I stared into the glowin’ embers, an’ watched ‘em slowly die. With what was goin’ through me head, a tear fell from me eye, I sadly eyed the little pile that had built up on the stones … Thinkin’ ‘Gee I wish that Blue was here … he would’a loved them bones’.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/24/2016 11:36:00 AM
wowww!!!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/26/2016 7:54:00 PM
G'day Neldy ... thanks for stopping by and reading 'old blue' - Lindsay
Date: 1/23/2016 12:32:00 PM
Wisdom and arts hug as twins in between your lines. A wonderful 7
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Date: 1/26/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Funom. I appreciate you commenting on 'old blue' - Lindsay
Date: 1/12/2016 2:11:00 PM
A gem of a poem. Of course my dog would live and I would starve. Love the tale you penned. love phyl
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Date: 1/26/2016 7:50:00 PM
Same here Phyllis. Our dog rules the roost. Thanks for commenting Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 12/27/2015 8:16:00 AM
Gash! I don't know what to feel in this exact moment , should I laugh or should I sink in my tears this is a very delicate and remarkable poem so well written, so much emotions u didn't focus on one feeling ,but many...unique piece of work I salute you....I wish u a merry Christmas for you and all of ur beloved one's as I wish u a happy new year....hugs / / :) dalia
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/28/2015 11:06:00 PM
G'day Dalia... nice to meet you... thank you for your encouraging comment and I hope that Christmas went well for you and your family - Lindsay
Date: 12/23/2015 8:27:00 AM
ANOTHER GEM! I laughed so hard upon reading that last golden line that my ribs hurt.. A7 Sending you a pm...
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Date: 12/28/2015 11:03:00 PM
Hello Robert... thanks for dropping by and I'm pleased you got a laugh out of this ... also I trust you and your family had a great Christmas - Lindsay
Date: 12/2/2015 4:05:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing. I would love your poetic eyes to read and comment on my poems as I'm just beginning but it's this sort I wish in the end to write. H
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/2/2015 6:44:00 PM
G'day Mockingbird... thank you for your comment Mockingbird. I will certainly read your poems and if you need a hand just yell out if you decide to write 'bush ballad' style - Lindsay
Date: 12/2/2015 12:14:00 AM
This really was excellent and heartfelt...emotional and funny. Great poem. :D
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/2/2015 6:40:00 PM
G'day Danetta... thank you for your kind comment. I'm pleased that you enjoyed reading this poem - Lindsay
Date: 12/1/2015 5:32:00 PM
.... 'and i don't know whether to laugh or cry' springs to mind Lindsay - fabulously written my friend:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 12/2/2015 6:38:00 PM
Hello Jan... yes Jan, the emotions ride high here, but in reality with me; it's my dog that would live - thanks again Jan - Lindsay
Date: 11/30/2015 1:55:00 PM
Lindsay did u just play with my mind? like i had two extreme emotions going on after this. and i didn't know which one to side with. well penned thou!
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Date: 12/2/2015 6:33:00 PM
G'day njeri... if I did play with your mind njeri, I didn't mean to but there are highs, lows, happiness and sadness in the poem . Thank you njeri - Lindsay
Date: 11/26/2015 6:14:00 PM
This is very deep and seeks meaning in feelings rather than words. It flows well and says more than the weight of any single word, relaying meaning in the sum of their collective strength. Beautiful words expressed with the heart of a poet. Emile.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/2/2015 6:30:00 PM
Thanks again for your encouraging comment Emile. All your comments are meaningful - Lindsay
Date: 11/26/2015 3:47:00 PM
This is excellent, Lindsay. I don't know whether to smile or cry!! Being a sentimentalist, I'll opt for the latter! #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 12/2/2015 6:27:00 PM
Hello Paul... although fictional, I just wonder how we would cope if we were starving. I couldn't eat me dog... ever. Thanks Paul - Lindsay
Date: 11/25/2015 4:26:00 PM
Wow! Thank you for sharing this gem. Beautiful............A.M.
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Date: 12/2/2015 6:25:00 PM
G'day Afolabi... thank you for commenting Afolabi. It's not factual as far as I know - Lindsay
Date: 11/25/2015 11:38:00 AM
This is so very sad , but wonderfylly written to tug at the heart! I always enjoy your talented pen my friend.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/2/2015 6:22:00 PM
Hello Connie... thanks again for your support. A totally fictional tale I think. These days we value our pets too highly to even consider this situation - Lindsay
Date: 11/24/2015 10:25:00 AM
OMG, this is beyond sad, Lindsay. Sure hope there was no truth in it. Yet a person would resort to this if they were truly in the direst of straits. I saw a movie bout people who ate the frozen bodies of their dead when their plane crashed in high mountains. I probably would have just let myself starve to death. I don't think I could do it.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/2/2015 6:19:00 PM
Totally fictional Andrea. You do realize that if you starved to death you would have been eaten too. There is no way that I would even consider my little dog as tucker... perish the thought. Thanks Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 11/23/2015 12:40:00 AM
I think I'd eat myself before my Cat, Lindsay. And I'd start with my feet, as I'm a big fan of cheese. I'd leave my todger till last, to use as a toothpick. Thanks for the smile, another great write, Lindsay. Regards, Viv
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Date: 12/2/2015 6:14:00 PM
G'day there Viv... just wait until you're starving Viv, your cat will look more like a lamb roast than a lamb roast. Thanks for sticking up for old blue - Lindsay

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