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As dawn vanquished the winter solstice the celebrations were over but Mary and Joe felt frisky,his fingers underneath her dress, stirring her pot keeping her simmering till she arched her back and moaned, pressing against his hand as her juices overflowed. Joe settled back licking his fingers as Mary dropped to her knees and burrowing under his robes released his staff and slowly, teasingly relieved his tumescence, although her hymen remained intact. Satiated they spooned, chatting of their upcoming nuptials and Joe shared the rumor that King Herod was to grant passage to some learneds from the East who were seeking to observe next year's comet. They always brought trade goods with them, so Joe was short selling frankincense and myrrh but he thought gold would stay firm. Their conversation then turned to their upcoming journey to register in Joe's natal town. Another damned tax, the Romans would run them into penury. And he'd better book a place at the Inn early, or else they'd end up sleeping in the stable.

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Date: 2/16/2016 9:35:00 AM
great quality with wonderful fitting of words and lines. The grace from this page is worth more than a 7. Visiting your pages always come with meeting my expectations and with this I say "Keep on writing please".. So so incredible.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/16/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thanks Funom
Date: 2/13/2016 7:01:00 PM
thanks for the reply
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Date: 1/26/2016 9:23:00 PM
DAVE, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/12/2016 8:02:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 1/14/2016 4:39:00 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Dave.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/14/2016 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Sharma
Date: 1/13/2016 11:46:00 AM
Dave, love everything about this poem, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love **SKAT
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/13/2016 9:48:00 PM
Thanks Skat, your contests will be sorely missed.
Date: 1/7/2016 6:47:00 AM
nice one
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/7/2016 4:42:00 PM
Thanks LL
Date: 1/1/2016 9:52:00 PM
Um.....well, don't quite know what to make of this write, Dave. It is very creative. I'll give you that. Hope your New Year is off to a good start.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/2/2016 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, I guess it's my way to try and humanize the M&J story. All the best for the New Year.

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