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Oh the Night Ii

Oh the night Oh my most precious night with your stars so bright radiant and full of splendor streaming down casting a glow a glow upon her familiar face her becoming face with your moon so calming and luminous it's hues of red and yellow and orange creating the perfect backdrop for this night Oh the night Oh my most precious night when I first touched her delicate skin caressing her cheek with the back of my hand speaking to her soul with just that look in my eye how I so longed to kiss her and her moistened red lips and when I did your sky lit up the winds surrounded us and carried us off into your sky Oh the night Oh my most precious night I am indebted to you for all the smiles you've created Oh how long I have waited for your countless dreamy nights

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Date: 11/13/2015 9:24:00 PM
Very nice Tim, enjoyed your write.
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Date: 11/12/2015 9:18:00 AM
...and Santa fared to challenge your title as King of Romance? No wonder The Wulfman called it silly attempt. :-) Good one, Tim!
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Date: 11/11/2015 6:16:00 PM
Awesome Tim. Great write. The night has given me special moments you write about. Love this write my friend.
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:52:00 PM
Well my friend, Tim, the awaiting night is yours after all. Enjoy it as I have enjoyed your romantic writing which, certain am I will melt the heart of any woman! Wonderfully done!
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Date: 11/11/2015 2:28:00 PM
- The most perfect night ..... romantic and lovely poem, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:58:00 AM
Extremely Romantic !!! A fave.
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Date: 11/11/2015 2:57:00 AM
Excellent. A lovely romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/10/2015 10:54:00 PM
some kind of enchanting read, tim.. the repetitive phrases disarm me.. huggs
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Date: 11/10/2015 9:59:00 PM
What a beautiful and splendid write, Tim. Simply enchanting....
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Date: 11/10/2015 8:46:00 PM
Well, if Elvis was the King of music, you sir are the King of romantic poetry! :)
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Date: 11/10/2015 4:04:00 PM
a dreamy romantic write Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/10/2015 4:10:00 PM
Thanks Jan

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