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Oh Sweet, Sweet Dew

A bed of grass is so mundane It sways in the winds as the most fickle of things And yields to the foot of man and beast and bug It is mowed and sowed on the whim of men And as i stretch upon this brittle mattress I am dazzled by the floating skies, the whistling breeze, and my comforting memories And not this dreary bed of grass And so love, to me, is like the sweet dew of the morning green As I lay back upon this nestling bed of grass It wraps my weary spine in a cool, welcome embrace And I think not of the dull blue sky, the incessant breeze or my nagging memories Instead I think how the dampness seeps into my back And how the cool bed of grass spreads shivers to my every ache And I breathe a sigh of relief, All because of this sweet dew on the morning green © Samir Georges 2010

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Date: 4/7/2010 7:19:00 AM
Simply beautiful, Samir. I have been away for some time and wanted to thank you for your very kind comment with regards to my poem entitled ' My Poems'. Elaine
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:24:00 AM
Great write Samir. Beauty and simplicity.
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Date: 2/8/2010 6:45:00 AM
Why not? why not put periods at the end of sentences? Why not capitalize only the beginning of sentences and proper names? Why not?..and conversely...Why capitalize only for the beginning of a line...punctuation lets the reader know where the writer is ending a thought. A line space can do the same thing. Do you think its a productive thing not to give the reader a clue? I enjoy talking to you and would love to hear your thoughts.
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Date: 2/8/2010 6:41:00 AM
The opposite of creation is destruction which supplies the raw material for creation. The opposite of Harmony is Discord if balance was created and sustained all life and death would cease to exist.(As we know it.) It is only in the vacillation that life existed with it's balancing force death. It is only in the periods of balance where man can reach the mind of God and be one with all of existance and at that point..for that period of"time" the individual ceases to exist.
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