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Oh Deer

I crawl through the underbrush. Swiping branches from my eyes. Not knowing what I will find. Deer poses for me. Why do people choose to kill? This I do not understand. I am left so very sad. As I question why My camera held in my hand. Capturing moment in time. Eyes so innocence stare back. This image preserved The sound of camera clicking Branch snaps beneath startled hoof Ears twich breath blows through warm nose Quick graceful retreat. Richard Lamoureux: Three Stanza's added Dec 15 th to previously written poem Russel's Natural Dodoitsu contest.

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Date: 5/28/2016 12:48:00 AM
Whew... I got the "oh I don't want to read about shooting Bambi moment" lol but kept reading and felt enormous relief... a mini rollercoaster ride that ended comfortably :) nice one!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2016 1:10:00 AM
Thanks Lukas. I appreciate you checking out another older piece.
Date: 8/10/2014 7:54:00 AM
That is the right kind of shooting! I love wildlife pictures and your poem is picture perfect
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2016 1:11:00 AM
Hi Casarah, somehow I missed this comment. A belated thanks and hug.
Date: 11/15/2012 6:00:00 PM
DID YOU GET THE SHOT YOU WORKED SO HARD FOR LOL,GREAT WRITE BRO
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2012 6:31:00 PM
Yep and only one stick in my eye.
Date: 11/15/2012 2:37:00 PM
hey this is brilliant Richard a photographer, awesome...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2012 2:57:00 PM
Thanks, never really liked the idea of shooting animals. I do however love being in the bush.
Date: 11/15/2012 11:54:00 AM
You are getting a good grasp of the Dodoitsu I see! It is a different form, hard to get sometimes, but worth it when you can get it right! You are doing a great job with it, keep it up! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and delightful poem this afternoon! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2012 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Russell appreciate your kind words.

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