''Oh Beautiful Wind''

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wind took my hair in a whirlwind of blowing movement, and I was lost in a fluttering tempest, of flowers and butterflies swirling and twirling, the leaves danced and the branches creaked, and I turned and looked at wind in the eye, oh he was beautiful, violent and gentle, and he took my breath away. __________________________________ August 25, 2015 Poetry/Verse/"oh, beautiful wind Copyright Protected, ID 15-703-707-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Wind, sponsor, Skat Fifth Place

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/1/2015 12:58:00 AM

Congrats on your superb winning write broken!

Skat A

Date: 8/30/2015 11:06:00 PM

Broken, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my WIND contest. SKAT LOVE

Thomas Martin

Date: 8/29/2015 12:45:00 PM

Excellent write! Admirer of wind also, actually love it!! Good job, Constance! Thanks for the Facebook post.

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/28/2015 5:26:00 PM

either that breath of fresh air....or the fact that it and the hurricane make a vicious pair....the wind is strong, it does indeed scare....but it comes From God And I'm In His Care....;)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/27/2015 4:05:00 AM

Very descriptive... and i like the scenery of this poem.. =')~Olive Eloisa

James Inman

Date: 8/26/2015 9:14:00 PM

I like this a lot, BW. Light sensuality, in a fantasy like format. Beautiful.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2015 2:53:00 AM

Wonderful write, B.W.good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve