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Just reflecting on those days of wandering in the woods with my son.  He would touch, smell, taste, examine everything and fill his pockets with surprises for Mom.

Of the Earth - Earthy Of the earth….”earthy” Hell, he was filthy, a veritable organic “Pig Pen” complete with dust trail. The trees “high fived” him as he walked, quietly, respectfully, among them. Forest ruminants contemplated his simplicity, predators welcomed his scent, the earth rejoiced at his footfalls. John G. Lawless 3/5/2016

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Date: 3/6/2016 12:41:00 AM
John, I really enjoyed reading this poem, it reminded me of my childhood days with my dad walking in the woods, I was like your son, I found things and brought them home, sort of still do, wonderful, and I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 3/5/2016 10:57:00 PM
This reminded me of many "earthy" hikes with our young sons in the past. Great poem!
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Date: 3/5/2016 6:28:00 PM
very cool making it about an earthy guy!!
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