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Of Birds and Lonely Men

Drab pigeons in flight, skimming over the streets Swift, restless movement, but going nowhere Cleaving curved wings in the hot and stagnant air While no one takes notice of a gray day's defeat They circle and settle, no rhyme or a plan They perch, then depart, feathered gypsies who roam Chasing the shadows, surveying the land They scavenge the streets, for a place to call home Summer that coils between cracks in the concrete Liquefied smog brews far deep in the bone Pigeons fly low, testing virtues of streets Assemble in flocks, yet must forage alone Searching at feet of the crowds who walk by Waiting for nothing, just a crumb from the sky ….. Drab men walking circles, slouched over with scars Their only companions are ghosts of defeat With no place to go, except under the stars They huddle in corners, as the bitter night peaks People and traffic are pounding the beat No one gives notice, while they travel not far Down sidewalks, and litter, in the noise of the street Like pigeons in circles, where home is the dark Summer that coils between cracks in the concrete Liquefied smog brewing deep in the bone And gray absent eyes, testing virtues of streets Just litter on sidewalk, where cruel winds have blown Searching at feet of the crowds who walk by Waiting for nothing, just a crumb from the sky ………………………………………………………………

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/18/2012 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2012 2:17:00 PM
Absolutely loved the repetition of phrases as it fit so well with the circular meandwerings of bird and man [as an astute reader of my verse..you know I love repetition ;)] also [shh don't tell] I see cities just like this, pretty dern horrid places, I guess country glas like us might YET my child, my son LOVES cities always has! WONDERFUL writing! excellent word choice [cleaving!]Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/17/2012 9:06:00 AM
Your talent amazes me! Congratulations on this moving piece. RAY
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Date: 6/16/2012 4:23:00 PM
Hey Carrie, Congratulations on your win for this lovely verse ...Samia
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Date: 6/16/2012 1:23:00 PM
This is a poem from a master! I am completely taken in by this hot summer scene and it's perfect free verse format! Favin' this one...Completely amazed! Gwendolen
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Date: 6/16/2012 5:45:00 AM
well written...congrats on your win...
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Date: 11/2/2011 11:57:00 AM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Sad that in our country these people live like this..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I am glad that another person in this world fixes leftover mashed potatoes like that..Sara
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Date: 10/27/2011 1:07:00 PM
Brilliant is too mild a word. The metaphor is well thought out.
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