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Ode To the Rain

Rain drops pounding upon my window pane, Oh joy! Not the foreboding sound of gloom. The sun blotted from the sky by gray rain bringing harmony and flowering blooms. I hear the distant sky's waning thunder. The catharsis of mother earth's womb shares the joys of rebirth in the winds chorus with the sound of wonder. In the warmth of my home, my soul declares; the rain has come to relieve me from stress. Shall I take a sweet nap or lose control? In my flannel pajamas, I delight in quiet time alone, feeding my soul. First, sleep with dreams, love caressed in starlight. Hand-in-hand, a stroll under silver moon. Awakened by a gentle kiss to spark feelings stolen by my mundane routines. With flower petals strewn, moistened blooms beckon me out to the park to skip and splash like a child in blue jeans. Rain still pours from the sky as I reach home for a matinee, Singin' in the Rain. Cozy with hot tea, no more need to roam. Warm, content feelings, I cannot contain. Gene Kelly inspires me to leave my bed dancing through my house with full abandon. Music plays loudly, I'm liberated. A gray day turns bright red. As I dance, ducks splash outside on my lawn. My tired body feels rejuvenated By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders for An Ode to Small Comforts on a Rainy Afternoon contest (Cyndi MacMillan)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/14/2014 7:00:00 AM
I love the rain Rhonda, Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/14/2014 5:03:00 AM
Nice ode and congratulation on the fine win, Rhonda
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Date: 1/13/2014 2:21:00 PM
Happy 2014 Rhonda, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 4/17/2012 3:52:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/17/2012 2:15:00 PM
Such a fine tribute to both rain & Gene! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 4/17/2012 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Cyndi's "Ode To Small Comforts" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/17/2012 12:50:00 AM
lol this is great Rhonda!! I love it...and Gene Kelly too....what a joy!! makes me wish it would rain...last time I danced in the rain it was late at night and I wore my boots and cowgirl hat--lol big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:24:00 PM
A great poem. You know how to comfort yourself. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/21/2012 11:24:00 AM
love the imagery here, Rhonda, and your Flanned pajamas, ah ah, wonderful poem, a pleasure to read. harry
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Date: 3/21/2012 3:57:00 AM
Great imagination here.Enjoyed.Best wishes.
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Date: 3/21/2012 2:09:00 AM
I read this poem and fell in love with the rain all over again,lovely sweet lady-Charma
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