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Ode To a Singer Songwriter

Friday came and the workplaces Surrendered their weary to the weekend Tiredness dissipating as the precious days Are contemplated with anticipation. Another crowd of friendly murmur Gathers in the little upstairs room Gloomy by day, evening transformed to a theatre within the music bar. She arrives having travelled With her instruments seen and unseen Steps up on the stage again Boots discarded, tippy toed pleasure. The first gentle notes picked out Hush the gathering to respectful silence As they cleanse the week from their souls Embracing the soothing delicacy. Then the voice arrives Chocolate velvet-smooth whiskey Sweet strong intoxicating earfuls Elevate spirits in ecstasy. Two hours disappear in a thrice A happy melancholy descends Pleasurable attendance struggles Against the tinge of sadness, it's over. The artist remains to greet the grateful Friendly chatter, CD signing Soon we shuffle back to life's reality Hoping she knows the joy she brings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/13/2015 12:00:00 PM
I always struggle with free verse, and so I gravitate toward poems written with such finesse one does not realize there's no rhyme because the words glide smoothly as I read them. This is a fitting ode to another artist. A 7 for your art, Brendan.
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/13/2015 1:19:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for your very kind words. I am new on this site and have just recently starting writing. It is so encouraging to hear positive feedback. Free verse works for be because I don't feel the restriction of rhyme and can describe what I'm feeling using the words that I want to! :-) Take care, Brendan.
Date: 5/10/2015 7:06:00 AM
I heard the sounds in that poem... Well done, Brendan.
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