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October Sky

Chameleon clouds Tempting mesmerizing view Pretty in pink shades Kaleidoscope sky Striking explosive colors Majestic image Dreamlike remote clouds Uniquely asymmetric Rorschach perceptions

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Skat A

Date: 9/2/2015 12:07:00 AM

Barbara, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT

Barbara Campbell
Date: 9/2/2015 4:05:00 PM

I thank you for selecting my poem. It is very gratifying. Barbara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/31/2015 5:05:00 AM

Wonderful string of haikus Barbara! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!

Barbara Campbell
Date: 8/31/2015 10:51:00 AM

Dear Upma: When I hear from you I feel happy. I do not communicate with people as much as I would like to. However, your words and thoughts are an ongoing pleasure. TX BC

James Inman

Date: 8/30/2015 8:46:00 AM

Barbara, beautifully written, very visual and excellent imagery. I love the first and last lines. Ever changing colors and images in the clouds. Reminds me of when I used to point out images in the clouds to my daughter. "By the way, Barbara, look at these clouds and tell me what you see." of course you have to imagine it being said with a German accent.

Barbara Campbell
Date: 8/30/2015 3:35:00 PM

James, I read it with the accent in mind. Thanks for your positive comments. Barbara

Constance La France

Date: 8/20/2015 8:13:00 PM

Barbara, so beautifully penned, A7 and best of luck in the contest and thank you for visiting my tattered poem, in answer to your question, I wept each word

Barbara Campbell
Date: 8/20/2015 8:33:00 PM

I have a picture in my mind of you as a sweet little girl in the church and of the walk with your father. By the way, where does the A7 come from? I've been meaning to ask, but did not until now. I appreciate your words regarding the poem. Thanks!! Barbara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2015 3:58:00 PM

Very nicely done. So descriptive, Barbara!! good luck in the contest.

Barbara Campbell
Date: 8/20/2015 4:20:00 PM

Andrea, Your comment means a lot to me (read your "Strangler" poem and was impressed) Barbara