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October seventh

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wake = wake-waters are those the ship leaves behind its course.

contest: Linda's Birthday
Sponsor: PD
Placement: 1st

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October seventh

October Seventh

Your birthday came, we celebrate,
one pretty candle's on the cake,
October seventh, cheerful date,
the sea-gulls fly above the wake.

Our ship shall travel thousand miles,
waves glitter like the distant stars;
with kindest thoughts and rainbow smiles,
this right to transfer's only ours.

How beautiful becomes the trip
when all around the dolphins dance,
the seagulls fly above the ship,
celestial clouds, the blue enhance.

Retentions kept, the times we meet,
and birthdays we transform to joy
perceptible October's sweet
of wishing poems, kind employ.

Cordate and soft's the touch of foam,
pristine the sea will send to kiss
affectionate your face and comb,
euphoric present of her bliss.

And every year the rainbow clings,
while Notus celebrates with you,
above the waves it rhymes and sings 
with seven colors on the blue!

© G. V., 10-05-2013

* Happy birthday, our sweetest Linda! *

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  1. Date: 1/9/2014 8:13:00 AM
    I am wearing a dark green pair of Ray Bans and smile at you! I am going for a long ride on my bike! :) *Always!* G.

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 7:49:00 PM
    Oooh, such eloquence, not to mention your impeccable rhyming. Well done, Giorgio. I'm sure Linda loves your special wish to her. Licia ;-)

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 5:19:00 PM
    This was a very heartfelt birthday wish for Linda. Wonderful work! I knew this would place, but I thought it would have been much higher! Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 3:10:00 PM
    No wonder you won as so i see in comments below..What a beautiful dediction Giorgio..So.much enjoyed.

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 2:38:00 PM
    thank you for gracing my page, G. i like that 'loo' thing...:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:27:00 AM
    Congrats on your win honoring PD.Sara

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 6:34:00 PM
    what a perfectly penned birthday poem...very creative and simply gorgeous

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 2:25:00 PM
    Really enjoyed this lovely write...congratulations

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 10:08:00 PM
    Congrats on the first place win in the contest, Giorgio

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Nice poem for the birthday girl.Congratulation on your 1st on her heart

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 7:38:00 PM
    G V., such a lovely poem...........CONGRATS! sweet win................... SKAT

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 10:24:00 AM
    This one I would put at the top of the list! Beautiful poem for a birthday wish!

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 9:31:00 AM
    What a beautiful birthday ode to a special person Giorgio... it made me feel free and in touch with creations splendor. Great write.

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 7:36:00 AM
    i like this kind of style from you, G... it is sentimental,gracious with words that truly delight.. congrats on your win... :) huggs

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 7:20:00 AM
    Hello Giorgio ... 28, first place!! ... certainly hard to choose .... all very friendly and caring, to the B-day girl Linda!! - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST PLACE! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 8:56:00 PM
    Hello Giorgio, :) Yes It has ARRIVED my sweet birthday! Thank you for the awesome birthday poem and dedication. Yes I am silly, and enjoy having fun. Sometimes I wanna celebrate the joy knowing others enjoy life sharing simple SMILES with love. God Bless <3 always & forever ** Linda

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 3:06:00 AM
    WOW! what a gorgeous birthday wish.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 7:21:00 PM
    - Ohhh.... so lovely poem for B.girl Linda !!! - Luck in contest, Giorgio ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 7:00:00 PM
    This is very beautiful and very poetic, much like Linda herself! I am sure that the birthday girl will love this poem. Terrific work, Giorgio! This should place high in the contest. I wish you the best of luck!

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 4:04:00 PM
    Wow..this beauty has the wow factor..Linda s gonna love this Giorgio...Kalinyhta..: )