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(Tanka) It's late October and November will soon show bringing new harvest as the temperature drops and golden leaves continue to fall. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 October,31,2014

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/4/2014 10:28:00 AM

Wonderful right on a new beginning on a new month :) loves and hugs eve

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 11:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve! Sending you love and hugs! :) xxxx D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/4/2014 3:59:00 AM

dorian very beautifully painted piece you can feel the chill in the winds excellent pen dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 10:16:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Liam,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xoxox D

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 11:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Liam, my dear friend. You grace me with your presence and kind comments as always.hugs! love and light! :) xxxxx D

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/3/2014 2:55:00 PM

A lovely Tanka to celebrate autumn and harvest time!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 11:22:00 AM

Hi Connie! Thank you for your visit and kind comments! ;) love and light! xxxx D.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/3/2014 12:56:00 AM

The beauty of Autumn depicted masterfully, dear Dorian!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 11:26:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments, dear Demetrios! Take care! Love and hugs! :) xxxx D.

Joseph May

Date: 11/2/2014 7:57:00 PM

Wonderful write Dorian....best wishes

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 11:23:00 AM

Thank you Joseph! The same to you! :) xxxx D.

Dennis Rarick

Date: 11/2/2014 6:28:00 PM

Nice poem Dorian!, It makes me feel a little sad, but i love the Phase " bringing new harvest", for me I see an aspect of hope. Love your work Hugs :) Dennis

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 11:15:00 AM

Thank you so much for all your kindness, Dennis! Hugs! :) Xxxx D.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2014 10:45:00 PM

very nice, Dorian. The perfect description of October going into fall. Don't forget to set the clocks back tonight . Wheeeee!!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 11:13:00 PM

Hi Andrea, now have to write one of November going into winter. Lol... No, I won't! Thanks for your visit and kind comment, my dear friend. ;) love and hugs! xxxx D.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/1/2014 5:36:00 PM

October is such a beautiful month. We were lucky ours was quite warm.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 10:56:00 PM

Hi Richard, yes it is and November is very special to me for many personal reasons. Lol.. I wish that here in Miami was a lot more cool than it has been so far. Well it seems my prayers have been answered because tonight is kind of cold...I am smiling at that. I bet you is going to get warmer tomorrow sometimes again. I hope not ! Thank you for your comments, always nice to see your face around My dear friend. ;) Xxx D.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2014 2:33:00 PM

Very inviiting Tanka..November is here with a great chill today..Freezing temps predicted tonight..Thanks for the visit to my page..I try to remember mostly the positive when remembering my parents..It is always uplifting to remember the good..Sara

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 11:05:00 PM

It is Sara! We got a little chill tonight here, it must be coming from up north, lol... Am loving it for sure! It won't last all year so I welcome it, wish this little cold lasted the whole year, my dear friend. Ah youre welcome and yes it makes sense of course. I really enjoy reading your beautiful poetry whenever I can. ;) xxxx D.

David Meade

Date: 11/1/2014 12:22:00 PM

Falling temperatures, falling leaving . . . fall -- yes that great time of year to celebrate a hot summer over and to give thanks for all the love and light we share. Loved the Tanka.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 1:38:00 PM

Dave, Is a great time of the year, and here in Miami,is kind of very cool this morn, and am loving it, well, as long it last. Lol....Thank you for your visit and kind comment! ;) xxxx D.

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/1/2014 10:54:00 AM

Lovely fall flavor to this tanka... enjoyed. November came in cold for my part of the country.... unusual to see 30's in November in the south. Thanks for dropping by my page !!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 1:30:00 PM

Debra, it seems like winter is arriving earlier in many parts of our country and the planet. So glad you enjoyed my late October tanka. And thank you for your kind visit and comments my dear friend! ; xxxx D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/1/2014 1:49:00 AM

November has begun. Sweet breeze is blowing over the hills where I live in this tropical region. Best wishes to you D. I pray to Lord for your health and happiness. I pray to Lord for the well-being of your near and dear ones. Love. xxxxxxx rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/1/2014 1:34:00 PM

Yes, it has begun in many parts, Rajat. Thank you for your visit and all and best wishes and prayers, to you too, my dear friend. ;) xxx D.

Dan Helppi

Date: 10/31/2014 9:50:00 PM

Here in Michigan the only thing falling now is snow snow snow!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/31/2014 11:41:00 PM

Dan, here in Miami the only thing falling now more than any leaves from my trees is ... rain and more rain for days at times, lol ;) . What abou I exchange you the rain for the snow. There are days is still so freaking hot and I hate it. ;) thank you for stopping by and your nice friendly comments. ;) xxxx D.