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October  Acrostic

O...October is a beautiful month.
C...Colorful it will be.
T...The trees change color and the leaves start to fall'
O...On the ground they form a beautiful carpet.
B...By the moonlight - they shine.
E...Everyone can enjoy their beauty.
R...Red, orange, green, yellow and brown are the 
      colors of this month.

                October Moon

The guitars were playing a tune under the
October moon. It was the middle of the night.
The guitars were shining by the moon light.
They were playing their tune and you started to 
sing a song, called - October Moon.... 

Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Copyright © Lucilla Carrillo

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  1. Date: 1/14/2014 11:33:00 AM
    Lucy, thank you for your last comments... ~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 12:53:00 AM
    I really like the images that come to mind. Also enjoyed the style shifting.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 3:37:00 PM
    Acrostic and romantic blue song. Let me dream and imagine it was a blue moon... Makes me feel like crying; this is a soft killing... before recovering from illness and awakening in a great relief of the sadness and pain... Thanks for sharing this very beautiful poem, dear Lucy! Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:28:00 AM
    Great acrostic poem. I'll learn to write one. Thanks for sharing. JM

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 11:52:00 AM
    Just beautiful of October. Beautifully pictured, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 9:19:00 PM
    I love the poem Lucy, October's such a beautiful month... love the sound, and free lance feeling under this October Moon... always~ Linda

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 1:57:00 PM
    so very beautiful in smiling sunshine

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Very beautiful fall poem it made go outside and take a walk just to enjoy the leaves and sunshine. Thank you for sharing your poem and commits.

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 7:12:00 AM
    not only beautiful, but very clever poetry,,, just love this. Lucilla...

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:37:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative lines fitted into this acrostic..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Beautiful Acrostic, brings back memories of my childhood in London during Autumn .Loved October moon too, well done...peter

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 10:50:00 AM
    What a lovely acrostic. We are having such wonderful October weather here in Ohio . I hope you are having a wonderful October as well.

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:48:00 AM
    sweet October poetry. I prefer September when it is warmer but October is prettier!!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:25:00 AM
    - Here we had a rarely beautiful in October this year ..... sunny, slightly crisp air and many beautiful colors. - Thank you for this beautiful poem Lucilla! - Have a nice autumn Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Excellent. Nice words. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 3:36:00 AM
    That is October and certainly deserves to be serenated by the moon! Well done, Lucilla! Thank you!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 12:12:00 AM
    I love the image of October depicted through your poetry. Well done

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 10:24:00 PM
    I don't know Spanish but I know enough to say muy bien, amiga (very good, friend) This is a tremendous write, I surely loved reading this lovely poem this evening! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:43:00 PM
    Very pleasing and soothing picture of October you create, Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:19:00 PM
    Buen dia Lucilla, Hermoso poema acrostico!! Respecto, ken..