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Ocean's Death

The ocean’s waves beating Beating against a huge rock Ocean’s waves washing away the sand The seagulls gulling The salty smell of the sea So overpowering So calming So relaxing Then running towards death I jump in the black, cold water Feeling dead, as cold as death The waves push me under Their weight crushing my body Feeling, groping, in the dark Dying, fleeing, being… I look death in the eye It screams…I die…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/10/2009 1:59:00 PM
Brilliant write Ciara, very dark>>James
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Date: 7/9/2009 6:35:00 PM
cold and dark , i love it :)
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Date: 7/9/2009 4:38:00 AM
Ciara, you kept me on the edge of my seat with this one. Excellent . Love, Carol
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