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Ocean Sands

The wet smooth sands shift, as we stroll along While hands clasp by evening's riding tide The long red sky hears each gliding bird's song As your soft silhouette n' sky doth clash collide In quiet motion, love loses all space and time As our lips warmly join together a silent spell To bright for sun's array, she fades to sleep As moon awakes the rays, of tender keep And both remain abandoned to the shore To find the realm that lover's shall confess With hands still clasped eyes they now explore As hungry kisses gentle still caress Grains feel wet yet cool, between our hands And the elixir of love is light, like ocean sands Written by Mystic Rose and Frederic Parker April 29, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/6/2014 4:29:00 PM
Passionate winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2014 12:37:00 AM
wonderful win.... good night Frederic... Linda
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/4/2014 9:05:00 PM
thank you Linda
Date: 5/2/2014 7:12:00 PM
Lovely collaboration. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/2/2014 7:37:00 PM
thank you Joyce
Date: 5/2/2014 7:09:00 PM
Nice duet! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/2/2014 7:37:00 PM
thank you Debbie for your kindness
Date: 5/2/2014 5:40:00 PM
Beautiful, beautiful. . . Congratulations!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/2/2014 7:36:00 PM
thank you for reading and for your kind response
Date: 4/29/2014 4:21:00 PM
Dear Frederic and Vie, Wow! You did a wonderful job on this collaboration. I live near the beach and see the happy couples strolling along all hours of the day and night. For some, the ocean and it's sands ARE an elixir of love. Beautiful work! (Frederic, Vie's a great lady with a big heart. Hope you write together again.) Love, Carolyn
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/29/2014 4:28:00 PM
thank you,Mystic and I have written together before, and I also live close to the ocean..3 miles
Date: 4/28/2014 6:56:00 PM
This is magnificent. I love the line "With hands still clasped eyes they now explore As hungry kisses gentle still caress"
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/29/2014 4:29:00 PM
thanks Tim Mystic is easy to write with

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