Obedience

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For we know who's in charge.

Koyaanisqatsi - What monster thing chases man? We feel life renewed. *

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/3/2016 7:39:00 PM

enjoyed this entry, good luck in the contest:) @-> LINDA <-@

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/4/2016 10:26:00 AM

I thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/3/2016 8:39:00 AM

- A good one, Iris - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/3/2016 6:28:00 PM

Do you suppose it's a storm?

Robert Heemstra

Date: 2/3/2016 8:25:00 AM

A very nice haiku even though I'm not familiar with that word, I know life has many storms. After every storm there is a feeling of renewal.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/3/2016 6:21:00 PM

Thank for stopping by Robert. Koyaanisqatsi was the name of a movie I saw in New York back in the 70's. It was about life out of balance; respect shown to nature, plus more. It was short and more like some sort of documentary.