O' Sunrise

O' sunrise O’ sunrise, yon orchid shimmer’d glow I pray, heed my humble plea, cast your light o’er sleeping fields a’ flow of gold leaf mist illumined ‘pon sweet breeze whispers, so that my love shall awaken amidst the splendor of honeycomb essence driftings gently caressing her face, warming her rose petal skin, lifting her dew drop smile so I too may bask in the impeccable beauty of this morning

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Heidi Sands

Date: 1/7/2019 8:10:00 PM

This is absolutely beautiful ! :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2019 7:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/25/2016 4:42:00 PM

Archaic imagery and classic romanticism.. A superb piece, such a pleasure to read!A7

Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 4:52:00 PM

Thanks so very much Robert, I am happy you enjoyed this one

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/23/2016 2:34:00 PM

The bard is gonna get jealous for you...Such a beauty..A classic indeed. A FAVE.: )

Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2016 3:29:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine, thou doth make me smile. :)

Paloma P

Date: 11/23/2016 11:15:00 AM

I could swear I left a review on this impeccable piece of poetry. It has the grand elegance of classically eloquent poetic beauty.

Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2016 12:17:00 PM

Thanks so much Paloma. You are far too kind to me, but don't let me stop you. : ) I always look forward to your visits.

John Hamilton

Date: 11/23/2016 8:32:00 AM

Love the archaic feel to this piece, nice way to wake up, so romantic.

Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2016 9:23:00 AM

Thanks so much John. I am thankful for your visits and kind thoughts.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/23/2016 7:55:00 AM

Hi Chris, It is such joy to see such beauty this morn. Since the sun has not risen yet, this write was my early sunrise. I agree with Jo, this piece has that old classics feel to it. Well done. A without doubt seven :-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2016 9:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis, that makes me smile that my poem can be your early sunrise this morning. What a beautiful thing to say to me. Your nice comments are always so uplifting and encouraging. Thank you again my friend.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/23/2016 7:34:00 AM

This is splendid poetry, Chris:) I love the language, 'tis amazing, reminds me of the old classics:) another 10:)

Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2016 9:18:00 AM

Thanks again Jo, I did try to write in that style a little bit in this one. I appreciate your kind words today.