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O' Butterfly

O' Butterfly, a child, disgraced Bewitched without a chance Beguiled, exquisitely endowed. Frail wings held no escape Such innocence would glaze her eyes, as gossamer might do He wooed her far astray with words, of promised wedded bliss Travail would kiss the purest heart, and weigh her soul with song ~ The season blossomed, softly charmed of spring and cultured lore But disarmed with hope of tender leaves of which the leaves were tongues His arms had warmed the coldest night, no stars to right the wrongs Tho' moon wore shadows of the sins conceived by western codes Her nature pure, as gentle rain, was as welcome as the sun Expressed in humble, reverent awe,...so eloquently sung A collector dressed in mock disguise…, without a thought or shame forgetful of her fragile ways, he caught her by surprise A uniform of chloroform, a smile that didn't warn A net, he held, along with schemes, a plot to win her hand then trapped her with a smile, a whim, a ruse of false intent With kisses spent, upon her cheek She flew into the bliss, with trust, a web of false retreat.... The deep abyss of love, she fell, her heart upon her sleeve His promises, with no repent, pretense, though, never spent Beneath the spell.....he said farewell, and kept the lies intact. With broken wings she could not fly Her eyes gazed out upon the seas Her voice cried out soliloquies But anguish left her there to die as if to find release Her heart impaled. The sword had won Grief had muted midnight's tongue while east winds echoed with her song… In death her song lives on
________________________________________________________ Inspired by the opera "Madame Butterfly"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/12/2015 10:26:00 PM
Man, you have just been kicking A$$ lately, Carrie! I've already commented on this poem but I came to visit it again because I really do love it and I think you should enter it in SKAT's "Butterflies Among Us" contest...
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:24:00 PM
CARRIE, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 8/10/2015 2:49:00 PM
Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:20:00 AM
Wonderful poem Carrie, beautifully written.
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:24:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Carrie! Eloquent write!
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Date: 8/9/2015 10:29:00 PM
Carrie, this is beautiful. So tragic, so doomed. Well deserved win, dear Poet. xoxo
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Date: 8/9/2015 5:18:00 PM
Her love impaled upon the sea. Wow, I love that line. A well deserved win, naturally!! Congrats to you, Carrie.
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Date: 8/9/2015 11:32:00 AM
Just a terrific poem! Kudos on your win!!
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Date: 8/9/2015 10:23:00 AM
What a wonderful write and congrats. On your awesome win.......A.M.
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Date: 7/27/2013 1:17:00 PM
wow! wow! spellbound!!!
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Date: 7/27/2013 1:07:00 PM
soup mail....
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Date: 6/16/2013 7:38:00 PM
Beautiful, spellbinding work. Poetic perfection that will go in my faves :)
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Date: 6/10/2013 3:23:00 PM
this is another example of your great talent, I honestly don't think I've ever read a weak poem of yours; an original take on the 'madame butterfly' story (at least, that's how I read it) - congrats (I would've given it a 1st) :)
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Date: 6/10/2013 9:22:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations with your nice winning poem... love~ LINDA
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Date: 6/9/2013 9:18:00 PM
thank you' Nate
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Date: 6/9/2013 2:54:00 PM
Oh, so beautiful!
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Date: 6/8/2013 3:37:00 PM
Unwritten words upon her tongue while the wind of autumn tell her ssong.Sooo very beautiful and going to my favourites.
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Date: 6/7/2013 10:45:00 AM
- Beautiful and sweet poem, Carrie! - Good luck in the contest. - Have a relaxed weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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