O Bacon

O Bacon! Alleya Joy Kolar 3/25/15 Ye' is so crisp! So greased up and sizzlin'! When I wake to your sent I be trip'n Because bacon you are my reason for livin'! Crisp is he, the love of my life. The reason for my drool. For my appetite. When I hear your slices slap onto the pan, The stomach within my stomach crumbles so my very own can fit more of you in it. He' so great and tasty. I'll love you forever Stay crispy!

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Old Buck

Date: 7/12/2016 12:53:00 PM

Alleya: Welcome to the Soup. O Bacon was very funny. I'm not a very sophisticated poet, more a silly rhymester but I know what I enjoy and I really enjoyed you piece. Keep them coming and thanks for sharing your work with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Jannie Breedt

Date: 7/12/2016 12:02:00 PM

Hi Alleya .I like the energy. Throw in some egg and I will treat you for breakfast! So welcome to our world in Poetry Soup

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2016 10:40:00 PM

Alleya, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2016 12:20:00 PM

- Poetry: Music in words .... rhythmic expression of emotion, like the nectar of the bee, you are sharing here with us Alleya :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2016 12:05:00 AM

Alleya,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**