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O! My Wonder World

O! My wonder world thanks thee for thy life thanks thee for thy beauty for thy companion and thy compassion, but let me escape. I neither want thy pain nor thy pleasure please let me move into the world where lies my soul.

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Date: 2/13/2010 5:51:00 AM
Welcome to Poetrysoup. You'll enjoy the site
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Date: 2/9/2010 4:01:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comment on my poem. I hope you will be posting more poetry soon. Keep on writing! Have a good day. Karen
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Date: 2/9/2010 7:00:00 AM
Great and impressive write. Welcome to soup. Sara
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Date: 2/6/2010 4:53:00 PM
A lot for the reader to ponder in this concise poem. I like the ending. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/5/2010 6:00:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. Sometimes the road to the soul is through the pain and joys we call life. Vince
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:48:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ... as this delight tonight... wonderful prose poetry.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:39:00 AM
To find the soul is to complete the cycle of our search ... and to locates us where others long to be. An enjoyable read. Welcome to poetry soup, the home of poets and friends, and I shall be honored to have you as more friend. Right on, my friend.
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Date: 2/5/2010 6:00:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shruti. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2010 5:41:00 AM
i love this it's very well written
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Date: 2/5/2010 5:40:00 AM
Sad and painful, you have captured these emotions very well. Welcome to poetry soup
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