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Below is the poem entitled Numb. which was written by poet Rachel W. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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When the one person who 'loves' you...
Walks away.
When the sun doesn't come out...
So the moon desides to stay.
When it seems nobody understands you...
You begin to fade.
The day I need support.
The day I need your love.
Is the day the world seemed to have turned it's back on me.
My friends? They're all too busy.
My family? Too caught up in the future.
Myself? Too numb to feel. Too hurt to care. To dead to live.

[Just a side note. All my previously posted works are from high school.. I'm now 21 and 
happy and healthy :) ]

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  1. Date: 4/7/2010 9:44:00 AM
    Enjoyed ! thank you.

  1. Date: 3/31/2010 5:22:00 PM
    ahhh....but you have your creative poetry! when thse feelings strike in life, I find my best poetry comes out when I'm quiet! I've got at least forty yrs' on you! and I still write best when I'm pensive about my world, or my planet! keep inkin! Rachel! jimbo